Moo – Chapter 10

Desperately seeking a narrator. It’s getting harder and harder to follow the dialog in the absence of attribution. Mopsy, Flopsy and Helen.

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Moo – Chapter 9

Still no narrator, and the strain is beginning to show. Another 1200 words, though: Flopsy, Mopsy and (eventually) Helen.
We’re into five digits! That’s practically a whole hand!

Moo – Chapter 8

Wherein we learn a little bit about Helen. Very little. About 200 words’ worth, although it takes a bit over a thousand words to learn it all: Helen.

Moo – Chapter 7

Home, sweet home. With sandwiches, and another 1,300 words, give or take: Flopsy and Mopsy.

Moo – Chapter 6

Poor Mopsy. Without his (regular) glasses, he can’t even get out of the restaurant in under 1,000 words: Mopsy

Moo – Chapter 5

Hardly worth it, but a necessary transition. The Narrator

Moo – Chapter 4

More Mopsy and Helen. I’m still not sure what they’re talking about. Whatever it was, it took around 1,600 words: Mopsy and Helen. Still.